Fanfic:the Unexpected Visitor P. 1

[snowflake]

Good beginning! Tony´s jealousy always provides a good storyline that´s true to the show. Good idea to bring Geoffrey with G back!

I can´t wait for part 2!

Lots of love and "Viel Glück", snowflake

[ReJoys2]

Eomiiml, The Unexpected Visitor is very good. I have a pretty good guess about what's going to happen in Part 2, and can't wait to read the rest of the story. Again, you rouse those defensive feelings in the reader to have someone come between Tony and Angela. Makes me dislike Geoffrey with a G even more! Keep up the good work! :)

[eomiiml]

Thanks. I am glad you like it. I am working on PT2. I am probably going to finish this weekend.

[Ashleeb]

Good job!! :)