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taxifan
02-21-2003, 02:51 AM
i liked your one line when you said about love, "you can't control it, you can't leave it"

i think the "you can't leave it" line supports angela's love totally! IN the end he comes back BECAUSE "you can't leave it" no matter how much you try to live apart and try to live a life without the other, it's fails. . .because "you can't leave it"

what a great line! thanks dreams girl for some new poems.

madewy
02-21-2003, 07:13 PM
I like your poem, Love Them Forever Dreamsgirl. It shows real depth of feeling. :)