SEPARATION ANXIETY

[snowflake]

I really loved your new fanfic, Jason. A fanfic about Tony´s separation anxiety is a totally wonderful idea. I think your script would have made a great episode for the show. I liked the nice little twist that Mona gets Tony to help Angela in Washington and at the same time gets rid of him at home where he goes on everyone´s nerves! That´s a typical "Mona"-solution to everybody´s problem.
How do you manage to make the dialogue so truely funny and witty? I liked how you combined new things with familiar things from the show. I really loved all the references to "Tony Bags A Big One" and "Savor The Veal" p. 3 etc. Thanks for incorporating my favourite WTB? element of continuity into your fanfic, Angela´s bathrobe. Also, everyone was so much in character in your story!

Write another fanfic really soon, please. I am really looking forward to it.

Lots of love and "Viel Glück", Verena

[Corinna]

WOW Jason! I can only agree with snowflake. This fanfic is SO GOOD and SO FUNNY! I love it!!! You really could be one of the real writers of wtb?!!! ;) I can't wait to read you're next fanfic!!!!!!

*Corinna* :)

[madewy]

B) Jason, I just read your new fan fic. That was very very funny. I'm sitting here reading away when suddenly I realize I have a huge grin :lol: on my face. You and Rejoys2 came up with a new approach and I loved it!
Thanks.

[Samisangelaspretenddaughter]

I read the fan fiction, and the fan fiction was ok.

[jasonc_wtbr]

Thanks, guys! Glad (most of) you enjoyed it! :) Anybody else read it and like it? Comments are always welcome. :)

Samis... If you could elaborate a bit, I would appreciate it. Writers do thrive on feedback, you know. ;)

[Samisangelaspretenddaughter]

I wasn't saying anything negative about the script. But, it's important to get honest feedback, as much as I'm sure you love to hear how great your script might be, it wouldn't be right to lie and say I really liked it. It was ok. What I mean is, I felt that the story line was all right. I didn't find it very interesting, or very creative, etc. I understand that you don't like having people who disagree with you, and so, I'm being nice, and so thus that means I was vague with the feedback, and not "everyone" is going to "always" like "every" script you write, and I also mean that in general as well. Not everyone is going to find every script from whomever wonderful, etc. I hope this elaboration is clearer. Let me know if for some reason you prefer only feedback that praises scripts. That would probably clear up any confusion for some of the members who might(feel reluctant to post feedback), wonder if it's ok to be honest about feedback.

[jasonc_wtbr]

Ay oh, I can handle any feedback, positive or otherwise... That's why I asked you to elaborate a bit, so maybe I know what I could do better on my next script. ;) Thanks for being honest. :)

[ReJoys2]

Samis, I think it's okay that you expressed your honest opinion. As Tony said, "Honesty is good." You are right that not everyone will like each fanfic equally. I like some better than others, but I appreciate each writer for the effort they make. We don't expect major works of literature here. Just a few minutes of entertainment to bring back some memories and remind us of why we like WTB so much.

[madewy]

:lol: Glad to have you back on the boards Rejoys, with your ability to get right to the heart of the matter.
Also I would like to tell you I got a real kick out of Seperation Anxiety. It was very very funny...I told Jason I loved the use of the puppets, especially adding an Angela puppet...I can just picture her!

[lilMicelli]

Well I think that any true WTB? fan who has been following from episode one would've loved it... that includes me!! I loved it SO much! Its so real and characteristic! And Samisangelaspretenddaughter (nice name, by the way... creative!) I think its Ok that you voiced your oppinion and all, but I think you prolly arent as big a fan of WTB? as the rest of us or soemthing. But thats Ok, kuz were addicts! :lol: Yeah, so, I LOVED it!!!!! You should write more! And More... and more! lol :lol: