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Unread 03-04-2010, 01:38 AM   #1
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The rain was violent. Standing under the street light one could see she was drenched to the skin beneath her slicker. She fought the March winds but chills shook her slight frame.

“Where you headed lady?” He tried a joke as he pulled up along side the curb, splashing her slightly.

She wasn’t laughing. She opened the door and lumbered onto the seat beside him.

“Where were you?”, she whispered. Her face was stone. Her voice was steel.
He told her, most earnestly, he was sorry. Truly sorry but there was an errand he had to run, something he had to pick up.

Looking down at hersellf she spoke. “I hope ‘this’ is worth it“, she scowled through chattering teeth.

He was going to wait. Wait until they were home and dry and cozy by the fire. Wait until he could cup her face and hold her hands. Until he could kiss her burgundy lips and flushed checks. But instead he impulsively took it from his pocket and held out the pouch.

“I hope so too sweetheart. You tell me.”
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Unread 03-04-2010, 10:59 AM   #2
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Awwww, madewy! I always love your stories and it's great to see you back around here!
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Unread 03-04-2010, 11:13 AM   #3
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I love it!
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Unread 03-05-2010, 11:53 AM   #4
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I just had to savor this one & re-read it several times before commenting, Madewy As always, so on-the-mark for our dynamic duo, thanks for brightening my somewhat dismal day (I just knew you had something brewing under your sunhat...)
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Unread 03-05-2010, 07:22 PM   #5
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Very beautiful.
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Unread 03-09-2010, 01:50 PM   #6
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Love this! I like your restraint, less is more. And I can totally picture this scene.
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Unread 03-12-2010, 03:36 AM   #7
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Thanks you guys. That's great to hear since this is the first of anything I have written in a long time.
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Unread 03-12-2010, 09:28 AM   #8
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(I know it wasn't mentioned in this thread, but) I guess that ankle bracelet is coming in handy, for us! So how's house arrest going?
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Unread 03-12-2010, 10:24 AM   #9
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(I know it wasn't mentioned in this thread, but) I guess that ankle bracelet is coming in handy, for us! So how's house arrest going?
Tee hee...that thought/visual cracks me up.
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Unread 03-19-2010, 09:46 PM   #10
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Can you hear me singing? "LOooooove it!!!" What a great job! You do good work, kid!
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