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Unread 07-04-2011, 06:26 PM   #1
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An odd request.

I recently wrote a story (literally just finished it three minutes ago) that I am very hesitant to post. It is a story that popped into my head and I tried to fight it as much as I could until it tied me to my chair and made me type it up. The thing is I need an objective opinion of the story before I post it. I know I usually just post my stories but this one is a major twist and out of character. I don't want to say anymore than that about it.

So if anyone is willing to read it and give me an objective view I would really appreciate it. I'll warn you though it isn't a warm fuzzy story.

Thanks!!!
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Unread 07-05-2011, 02:01 AM   #2
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Not "a warm fuzzy story" !? Your search for an objective opinion ends here. If you want me to read it, I'll send you a PM with an e-mail address, and I'll tell you what I think about it.
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Unread 07-05-2011, 10:15 AM   #3
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I'd be glad to, Sherry. In fact, why not post the story on my yahoo site?
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Unread 07-05-2011, 05:22 PM   #4
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Ashley: I sent it to your website.

Will: It would be nice to have a male point of view. So go ahead and p.m. me.


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Unread 07-06-2011, 02:30 PM   #5
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Ashley: I sent it to your website.

Will: It would be nice to have a male point of view. So go ahead and p.m. me.


Thanks!!!
I sent you a reply via facebook; based on what I've said, I hope you continue the story.

-Ashley
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"The love of this woman grounded him..." {Taken from a wtb? special, although I'm not sure which one, lol}
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Unread 07-06-2011, 07:40 PM   #6
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Thanks for your input!!!
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Unread 12-28-2011, 04:44 PM   #7
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So after thinking about whether or not I should post this story and after having a few other members reading it and giving me their POV's I have decided not to post it. Usually when I write a story or a chapter to a continuing story I can't wait to have it posted and hear what others have to say. And even though CharmedCherie and Lasabia said they both liked the story I can't help thinking that they would be the exceptions to the rule. And I'm not saying all this because I'm afraid that the majority of you would hate the story- in fact I'm 99.9% positive you all would. But, as I said in my first post this story has a major twist and someone does something completely out of character. Now, I'm thinking that maybe it is to out of character.

I just thought I would post this in case anyone was wondering if I was ever going to post the story.
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Unread 12-28-2011, 11:23 PM   #8
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So after thinking about whether or not I should post this story and after having a few other members reading it and giving me their POV's I have decided not to post it. Usually when I write a story or a chapter to a continuing story I can't wait to have it posted and hear what others have to say. And even though CharmedCherie and Lasabia said they both liked the story I can't help thinking that they would be the exceptions to the rule. And I'm not saying all this because I'm afraid that the majority of you would hate the story- in fact I'm 99.9% positive you all would. But, as I said in my first post this story has a major twist and someone does something completely out of character. Now, I'm thinking that maybe it is to out of character.

I just thought I would post this in case anyone was wondering if I was ever going to post the story.
You could, however, write a continuation having them 'weather the storm,' so to speak...
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--Tony Danza on friend and co-star Judith Light

"The love of this woman grounded him..." {Taken from a wtb? special, although I'm not sure which one, lol}
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Unread 12-29-2011, 06:29 PM   #9
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I'm not sure how to do that without giving away with what happens in the story.
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